Mr Gadd

      Making plans

I have:

• Think are you writing (P.I.E) which means   Persuade, Inform and Entertain
• Brainstorm ideas ( bubble map)
• Collect information,
• what text form will I use? (recount report)

Start writing

Write your plans down.

Am I . . .

• Writing down ideas put in all information the audience needs.

• Correcting as I write
• Using feedback.
• Writing like a reader.

             

          Craft again

Re-read and change your writing

Do I need to . . .

• use more words and more ideas

It needs to make sense and have everything that the audience needs.

• sort out the way words and ideas are organised?
• Delete or replace words and better ones?
• Add or improve language features?
• Add more words and more ideas

 Make Sure

• Check and fix your spelling  and punctuation
• Capital letters for beginnings of sentences
• Others can read your writing easily                 
• punctuation (full stops, Exclamation marks and question marks
• commas, apostrophes,speech marks,brackets,semi colons and colons.

Correct spelling (KNOW,LOOK AND HEAR WORDS)?

                             SHARE!!!

Present your writing for an audience.!!!

                       You could:

• blog it!
• speak it!
• E-mail it!
• display it!

Room 7 assembly item

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Room 7 has made a Assembly item, have a look at the video and comment below Thanks!

Safety Kayaking rules!!

Safety Kayaking Rules

Introduction:

This is room 7 kayaking on the first day in the pool, we are learning to be safe all times in the water.

This is Georgia, trying to fit the life jacket, but oops it doesn't fit, Georgia is trying to fit the life jacket but it’s too much loose, if you are kayaking or boating or doing anything out in the water you have to wear a life jacket, if you are in a life jacket and it is loose and you capsize into the water, then you will drawn, so that's why you have to wear a life jacket to be safe in the water. You have to be safe all times in water.

Next, Georgia getting ready for kayaking in the water, she is trying to pull the string tighter to make her be safe in the water.

Later Georgia has tightened her life jacket, now Georgia was sitting and riding the kayak, she is having fun, but it is most likely that she can capsize but if she does capsize she wont drawn because she has perfectly fitted her life jacket.

Conclusion:

I hope you have learned about being safe all times in the water, so if you want to the water always wear a life jacket.

Once upon a fantastic day

Once upon a Fantastic Day!

Once upon a Fantastic Day, an fantastic boy woke from his fantastic dreams, got out of his fantastic bed, put on his fantastic clothes, the fantastic boy brushed his fantastic teeth and ate his fantastic breakfast, kissed goodbye his fantastic mum and set off to school with his fantastic friends. As he walked with his fantastic friends along the path, he past some fantastic shops until he reached his fantastic school. The fantastic boy was late for his fantastic class and this is where everything fantastic happened........

"Good morning class," Miss Scavenger yelled from room to room, I hope you haven't been naughty in class, she commanded in a serious mode "NO," everybody yelled out to the teacher we have been good the last minute you have been out  "good she replied back. "Ok everyone we are going to make a present for your mums and dads today, now have a think what you're gonna make for them" the teacher said in a nice, happy voice, I the fantastic boy thought and thought and thought for an idea "I am going to make a necklace for my mum," he replied to his head. Moments later when it was time to go home, the fantastic boy finished his present and put it in his bag to take home to his mum, RING RING RING the bell rang I got my bag and walked off home, when I got home I yelled out "MUM! look what I made for you at school, a necklace" "wow I love it thanks,"mum said happily. Late at night it was getting windy and dark and the fantastic boy went into his fantastic room and cuddled in his fantastic bed with the fantastic blanket, “WOW! sure was a FANTASTIC! day today at school" the fantastic boy signed, and he and his fantastic mum lived fantastically ever after.  

THE END  : -)  

Shopping Countdown

Groceries	Cost
Toilet Paper Sky White	$5
Toothbrush adult Medium	$2.00
Macleans Toothpaste Mint	$2.00
Anchor Milk Blue Top	$4
Home brand Toast White Bread	$1
Pedigree Adult Dog Biscuits Chicken	$27
Tip Top Icecream Cookies & Cream	$5
Garnier Fructis Shampoo	$5
Palmolive Soap Chamomile	$3
Garnier Fructis Conditioner	$5
Robert Timms Coffee Bags	$4
Chocolate Block Dairy Milk	$4
3D Chewing Gum Grapefruit	$2
Mentos Mini Sweets Rainbow	$2
Chelsea White Sugar	$3
Groseries	Cost
Toilet Paper Sky White	$5
Maggi Oriental Noodles	$3
Chips Salt & Vinegar	$1
Choclate Fudge Cake	$7
Airwick Lotus Flower	$3
Original Toffee Caramel	$3
Bluebird Multi Pack All Stars	$5
Family Pack Lolly Scramble	$2
Arnotts Tim Tam Chocolate Biscuits	$4
Container Biscuit Box	$8
Sanitarium Weetbix Wheat Biscuits	$8
Muffins Large Coffee & Walnut	$3
Dog Treats Marrowbones	$11
Abes Bagel Bites Multi Pack Pizza	$5
Homebrand Cheese Block	$9
Maggi Packet Soup Mushroom	$1
Fresh N Fruity Berries & Cream	$6
Just Juice Fruit Juice Tropical	$5
Soft Drink Pack Flavored	$11
Grooming Shampoo for Dogs	$8
Watties Kumara Chips	$3
McCain Peas Frozen	$5
Watties Baked Beans	$5
Fresh Produce Plums Black	$7
Craig Plum Jam Red	$3
Eta Peanut Butter Smooth	$11
Edmond Flour Self Raising	$11
Milo Drinking Chocolate	$4
Kellogg Cereal Coco Pops	$8

Total    $250 Altogether

Subtraction stratergy

This video will help you with your maths ( subtraction ) so Come and look at this AWESOME! video now and leave some comments below thanks! :-)

Division stratergy

This video will help you with your maths, come and have a look at this video