Thursday, April 03, 2014

Mr Gadd

      Making plans

I have:

  • Think are you writing (P.I.E) which means   Persuade, Inform and Entertain
  • Brainstorm ideas ( bubble map)
  • Collect information,
  • what text form will I use? (recount report)



Start writing

Write your plans down.

Am I . . .

  • Writing down ideas put in all information the audience needs.
  • Correcting as I write
  • Using feedback.
  • Writing like a reader.
             

          Craft again

Re-read and change your writing



Do I need to . . .

  • use more words and more ideas
It needs to make sense and have everything that the audience needs.
  • sort out the way words and ideas are organised?
  • Delete or replace words and better ones?
  • Add or improve language features?
  • Add more words and more ideas




 Make Sure
  • Check and fix your spelling  and punctuation
  • Capital letters for beginnings of sentences
  • Others can read your writing easily                 
  • punctuation (full stops, Exclamation marks and question marks
  • commas, apostrophes,speech marks,brackets,semi colons and colons.
Correct spelling (KNOW,LOOK AND HEAR WORDS)?



                             SHARE!!!
Present your writing for an audience.!!!
                       You could:

  • blog it!
  • speak it!
  • E-mail it!
  • display it!

Tuesday, April 01, 2014

Room 7 assembly item


IMG 1611 from Tipene Cottrell on Vimeo.

Room 7 has made a Assembly item, have a look at the video and comment below Thanks!